Ferrari Mailing List: Re: A moment of your time per favore ( F content yes)

[JAshburne (JAshburne]

Phil:
 
I had no trouble accessing the website, it loaded with lightening  speed.  
The pictures are pretty good resolution, I was able to get a sense  of the 
quality of the cars if not a complete picture.  Maybe you will want  to include 
more complete sets as you get time and maybe bandwidth.
 
Stylistically, I felt that your words were too jammed together, with not  
enough white space.  I'm a big fan of proper spacing for margins and  between 
paragraphs, as well as block style formatting that looks professionally  
printed 
(or laid out).  I also might organize your "About Us" section  differently to 
emphasize your experience and car guy qualifications, but it  isn't bad at all 
as the very lack of slickness actually comes across as a  genuine look at who 
you are.
 
You might want to address the lack of a store better so that people know  
where they can see the cars and also to allay any feeling that you are not a  
professional broker/seller.  Lots of people have virtual companies these  days 
and bricks and mortar aren't as important as they used to be.
 
Overall, pretty nice effort for a relative beginner and much better than  
some sites that I have come across.
 
John
 
 
In a message dated 6/24/2008 11:17:53 A.M. Central Daylight Time,  
philville [at] dejazzd.com writes:

Please take a moment and read the  attachment,

Grazie, Phil
Philip "Phil"  Tegtmeier
39 Churchill Drive
Elverson Pa  19520
610.525.8949
And, go to: ...  www.PhilvilleUSA.com







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